Beach Clean Up!!!

At beach clean up everyone found a lot of cigarette butts. Their was a competition on how many cigarette butts to be found, I think the most cigarette butts was 150, I think.

My Learning PowToon!!

This is my learning PowToon, I did mine about my maths. I think I could’ve improved on  explaining it better but I didn’t know how to, I think that I did good in timing and editing.

The Tangelo!

The Tangelo

As I breathed in and then out I admired the smell of the fresh tangelo. As the smell crept up my nose I thought about what it smelt like. I thought to myself, orange? But then I said no? Fresh air? No? It smelt like Orange and fresh air put together! I swept my fingers across the wavy, bumpy skin, there were little black dots on the tangelo, they made the tangelo look like it had black freckles. I carefully dug my thumb underneath the the fresh skin and began to peel. When I was finished I took a piece off and stuck it into my mouth I bit it and the juice poured down my throat, FRESHNESS!

The End.

This is my Tangelo writing, my goal was to use descriptive words, I also needed to use similes. I think I need to work on similes because I only used one.